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"As I looked up, I saw bright lights shining above the dark water, so I picked up my body and then I knew, life is like stars, shining for the moment, until the sun raises, it is worth fighting for."

So, that's my original character Charlotte. I wrote a story about Titanic, not like fanfiction or anythinig to the Titanic (the movie). But I really wanted to show some other view of the Titanic tragety (though it has a happy ending for my character) 

So she's an artist, but like you know it the turn of the century women's art wasn't like a thing, unless you were Beatrix Potter, and young women had to be precious and inocent and all that stuff, I'm not saying that I'm not into that (okay, I am the feminist...sometimes to much, still love ya!), but at that time we are not really looking for that kind of character, so I made her rebelious! Note: She's driving a car and she ain't nothing about a tea time talk (is there the word fir it??) So on the boat she is really excited about everything and as they set off she draws the boat and fight with her mother and try to avoid the corsets. So then she fills this weird feeling in her stomack and she passes out and then the MAN comes in. (Though it's not that much of a love story!) So he is a doctor that watches over Charlette, and they become friends, and they both have those dreams of floating and seeing things around them, but kinda in the mist and those flicking lights at the top. So then everythnig is nice until they scream out, that the ship is very close to a glancer... So Charlotte finds herself in the water, she is floating, dead frozen bodies are surrounding her, and she sees the flicking light, shining and shimmering in the water- stars and then this upper "thinking monologue comes in. I won't spoil the rest of the story. Though I think I should translate it into english, or make a comic or something (though I'm not very good at making comics), but tell me what do you think.
Oh I should mention that the name of the story-book whatever is In Embrance of Stars (because the night of Titanic's drowning was moonless, clear and full of stars and I really liked that idea ;) )

So if you are still reading or if you left when you saw this ugly, nasty Title of the painting, here is WHY :D
I told you the story, because I have no idea how to name the piece! PLEASE, PLEASE help me name it, please please please :D :D 
I just have no idea :/ :/
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smolnoodlekitty's avatar

The Stars is a lovely name already! It ties in with the title of the overall story, and it’s simple and elegant on its own. Alternatively, you could go with something like “Starlight” or “The Nightmare,” or something along those lines.